obiwan100 ([info]obiwan100) wrote,
2006-02-28 00:59:00
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"blue", 30/100

Last fic for now...another five coming tomorrow.

Title: Blue.
Fandom: Star Wars.
Characters: Obi-Wan Kenobi. (Ani/Obi)
Prompt: 15. Blue.
Word Count: 183.
Rating: PG.
Author's Notes: Angsty!Ani...but when isn't Ani angsty? Heh.

Even after Anakin grew to the point where he towered over his Master, he still felt dwarfed by him. Obi-Wan had a certain presence, one that Anakin, no matter what he accomplished, could never help to emulate. It wasn't deliberate on Obi-Wan's part, it wouldn't have been as effective if it was. Obi-Wan was soft-spoken and reluctant to fight, but he still gave off the aura of a potentially deadly opponent, one proven when, all too often, he was forced to resort to igniting his lightsaber.

Anakin couldn't help but admire Obi-Wan; he was the Jedi he aspired to be, though he knew he would always fall short. It was that very reason why he chose to fall in love with Padme. She was intimidating, yes, but not in the same way as Obi-Wan; it was an intimidation he was capable of overcoming.

Sometimes, he imagined telling Obi-Wan that he loved him, not in the proper Master-Padawan way, but something entirely different. He could picture Obi-Wan's reaction, perfectly calm and emotionless as he broke Anakin's heart, his cool blue eyes piercing Anakin's soul.
Tags: ani/obi

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[info]elledwen

February 28 2006, 07:11:12 UTC 6 years ago

My inner-Ani is crying. *sighs* You know how he is. I liked this though. Even if it is very emo-ish.

[info]sanestlunatic

February 28 2006, 16:28:42 UTC 6 years ago

*pats inner!Ani* Yeah, I was thinking of him when I was writing it. I think the more tired I am, the more angsty my writing is. If I wrote something right now, for example, everybody would die.

[info]lumy12

February 28 2006, 15:04:48 UTC 6 years ago

I just read all these that you posted so far. Love 'em. I'm such an angst whore. And I see you're keeping me waiting for the one you teased me with last night... you little tease!

[info]sanestlunatic

February 28 2006, 16:30:34 UTC 6 years ago

Thanks! Heh, I did tell you that it needed revision (or I think I did). It should be up today or tomorrow, I hope (right now, I'm not quite coherent enough to revise).

[info]lumy12

February 28 2006, 16:38:23 UTC 6 years ago

Yes you did. You also said you were too tired last night to do it. But when I saw you posted stuff I thought maybe you got a second wind. Heh. Go back to bed!

[info]sanestlunatic

February 28 2006, 16:41:46 UTC 6 years ago

Nah, this was just the stuff written at the beginning of the night, so it didn't really need revision. As the night went on, I grew more incoherent. *sigh* I can't go back to bed, I already ate breakfast.

[info]hlglne

February 28 2006, 16:59:52 UTC 6 years ago

more than he could ever hope to emulate. Oh yeah. I wrote that, too, once...only they were already doing it. Unimportant detail,though, in light of the big picture.

[info]ms_erupt

March 1 2006, 08:43:15 UTC 6 years ago

He could picture Obi-Wan's reaction, perfectly calm and emotionless as he broke Anakin's heart

Oh, you have to know that made me misty eyed.
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